Friday, April 30, 2010

Short Story Posted!

Tonight, at 10:45, I finished my editing of The Last Church and have put it up for free reading on this blog.  It's approximately 5600 words, so it's a quick read-about fifteen to thirty minutes depending on how fast you read.  If you can't comment on that page, since there is often problems commenting on pages other then the main blog page, just comment here.
~Steadfast,

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

Wow. Seth, that was GREAT! WOW! I was on the edge of my seat for fifteen minutes and the end was so expected yet unexpected, happy yet sad, very thought provoking. It was EXCELLENT!

-whisper

Storyteller said...

Neat story, Steadfast! One thing I am wondering about; if Jeremiah died, then doesn't that mean his mission failed?

You are a fantastic writer. Keep it up!

Seth said...

Thank you Silverloom!

Actually, *spoiler alert* the rapture came is what happened. If you noticed around the end when it said "But when the next gun sounded it hit nothing but air. Jack was no longer there." God had taken His people. And Jeremiah was also one of His people, so he was raptured as well.

This isn't to say that I know when the rapture is coming though. This is fictional, in the real world, only God knows when the rapture will happen.

Anonymous said...

Ah... I too wondered about Jeremiah. That makes sense.

-whisper

Aidan Romero said...

Amazing.

Storyteller said...

O-oh! Sorry, I'm slow. ;) Thanks for explaining.