Short Story Posted!

Tonight, at 10:45, I finished my editing of The Last Church and have put it up for free reading on this blog.  It's approximately 5600 words, so it's a quick read-about fifteen to thirty minutes depending on how fast you read.  If you can't comment on that page, since there is often problems commenting on pages other then the main blog page, just comment here.
~Steadfast,

Fantasy, Part Six

Fantasy, Part Six, Evil Creatures

Evil creatures is much more of a category then an actual race.  There are many types of 'evil creatures', there are orcs, trolls, goblins, and many more unique species.  They all typically have the same characteristics and traits.

• Repugnant in appearance, smell, etc.
• Fighting within.  They generally don't respect each other and are constantly fighting for power or our of simple hate.
• Uncontrollable.  Unlike other species, evil creatures are disorganized and uncontrollable on the battlefield and off the battlefield alike.
• Numerous but not as skilled in battle.  The inverse is also true with other evil creatures such as trolls.
• Without conscious.  With some creatures the author-or director-makes the creatures have a conscious, however, they don't listen to it as often.  But in general they do not have discipline and virtue which often leads to the other characteristics listed.

    All evil species are horrendous.  Ugly-looking, terrible-smelling.  Just plain scary and disgusting creatures.  

    Inward struggle is a huge problem in evil creatures.  Fighting for power among themselves, or fighting out of blood-lust or anger.  Because of their almost mindless nature they are always fighting among themselves if they are not fighting other species.  A perfect example of this is in Return of the King when Frodo is taken captive by the orcs, and Shagrat and Gorbag, two orc captains and their companies fight for the spoils of their find as well as being known as the company that found the hobbit in the first place.  This inward struggle actually allowed for Sam to rescue Frodo without being spotted and taken captive as well.  Who would of known what would have happened if he was taken captive?  Probably J.R.R. Tolkien.

   These creatures are uncontrollable.  Which is part of the inward struggle problem, but more specifically, they cannot be controlled.  That wasn't worded right, they can be controlled, just not well.  Since they cannot be controlled and maintain order they often have inward struggles as mentioned.

   These creatures are have huge populations, however, they're not as skilled in battle, or anything for that matter.  The inverse of this is also true however, because creatures such as Trolls, Dragons, Balrogs, etc are much rarer and are much more skilled in battle.  These creatures can turn the tide of the battle if implemented properly.
   These creatures have no conscious.  They are often used as an allegory for the world-people who have not accepted Christ-or fallen angels who are servants of satan.  Because of this, naturally, they don't have the same virtues as the others, and, if they do have some virtues, they do not value them as highly.  For some creatures, such as trolls or goblins, they do not have a conscious at all and just have a terrible desire to kill and be be in control.
 That sums up evil creatures and beings.  It's really a huge factor in fantasy that isn't given much thought.  Think about it though, what would Lord of the Rings be without Orcs, Trolls, and Balrogs?  What would the White Lion Chronicles be without Dairne-Reih?  What would the Circle Trilogy be without the Horde or Shataiki?  Evil creatures are a key element to fantasy.  It may be very practical, but it is equally important to the story. 
This is the last installment in my series on fantasy creatures.  While I may start again on another series about fantasy, I encourage you to visit Worthy Fantasy, a Christian E-Zine about the fantasy genre.  Some great articles, interviews, book reviews, and occasional giveaways are already on the site and will be coming very soon.

~Steadfast,

A Century Turns-New Hopes, New Fears by William J. Bennett

I recently had the chance to experience the great feeling that continually happens with books.  The one where you read the entire book, and slowly close the book, thinking about the great and bad parts of the book you finished.  The books name was A Century Turns-New Hopes, New Fears written by William J. Bennett.  Before I go any further I'll give you a forewarning, this is not an easy read.  This is something that deals with real-world situations and has some mature themes.  It was not a Christian book particularly, though it wasn't against Christians by any means.  There were around three curse words in the book, mostly in quotes; so if that's something that will upset you then I suggest you do not read the book.  Without further ado here's my take on the book:

What's happened to our country?  It seemed such little time ago that there wasn't such terrible corruption in the capitol; before the war on terror began; before scandals broke out across the nation with all kind of huge figures.  What happened?  William Bennett discusses in great detail the last twenty years as a country.  

I’m not going to lie; the book was pretty boring in some places.  This is simply my opinion however.  I know people who would read this kind of book in four-hour plane ride.  Political non-fiction  simply fails to captivate me-not to say I don't enjoy it however.  Besides that, the book was great.  Bennett summarizes and explains what’s happened with precision.  He never misses a chance to give the reader something interesting to think about.

He covers all the presidential, as well as some congressional, elections with extreme detail.  Telling me everything that happened with unmatched detail since he had known many of the candidates and had talked to them before writing this book during the elections.  He also covered the war on terrorism, talking about attacks during Bush, Clinton, and again Bush’s administration.  He also discusses a few of the current issues going around with the current administration and congress. 

Overall, it was a great book.  A great addition on the bookshelf.  I would definitely recommend it.

To visit the amazon page, please click here, to view the publishers page, please click here.

Fantasy, Part Five

Fantasy, Part Five, Elders and Magical Beings
*THIS POST HAS BEEN REMOVED FOR VARIOUS REASONS... I AM SORRY FOR THE INCONVENIENCE, IF YOU WOULD LIKE ANOTHER GREAT POST ON A SIMILAR TOPIC PLEASE VISIT HERE*

Also, I have posted a few poems on one of the pages and will be posting more soon.  Look out for the imminent posting of my short story, "The Last Church"!
Until the next post,

~Seth

 

I've been interviewed!

I have been interviewed in Brayden Hirsch's Young Writer Spotlight series at Write Big!  It's a pretty awesome interview, I encourage you to go check it out.  If not for the interview for the blog itself, Brayden does a great job on his articles and tips.

In other news, I don't think I've said this before, but I should have.  Worthy Fantasy is now up in running!  A few guys and I started this up a while back and we have now published our second issue last Thursday.  It's a great site and if your a fantasy reader it's a great-I'm so unbiased when I say this of course ;)-E-Zine on the fantasy genre through the eyes of Christians.  When you get there go ahead and follow if it if you will, besides us being encouraged by the numbers it also gives us ideas for how many readers we have for topics and special events we may do in the future.  Thanks,

Seth,

You can't do anything? Hold up

Okay, so the last post and this post are related to politics, but politics is something I feel we too often ignore, but something that's terribly important.  Now, even though the health care bill is a huge deal I'm not going to talk about that, that's the past.  This post is about us doing something about the future.
Part One
Many teens, and adults, would happily sit back and do nothing, until it came to voting.  So they do their one act of politics that year and vote, then they go home and wait to see the results.  Surprise surprise, they candidates they voted for didn't win.  What happened?  They hardly did anything.  If all someone does is vote, if they don't get involved then their not going to make a huge difference.  The sad thing is, some don't even vote.  Not to say voting isn't important, that is a civil duty.  Given our freedom it's our responsibility to vote.  (Of course, if you're a teen I don't expect you to vote yet, nor can I vote yet, but have no mistake that I will vote when I turn 18)
I was reading a book yesterday entitled A Century Turns by William J. Bennett when I read about an education bill in congress.  George Miller, a liberal congressman from California, proposed an amendment that would practically outlaw homeschooling.  Mike Farris and his Home School Legal Defense team weren't happy about this, nor was Focus on the Family.  Soon tens of thousands of homeschoolers and their supporters were phoning the capitol.  The capitol's phone lines were so backed up that the congressmen and congresswoman could hardly even call their offices.  Soon the capitol gave up crying for the mercy of the callers.  They removed the amendment from the bill.  Point of the story?  We got involved.  I realize that not all of my readers are homeschooled so it doesn't have the same affect as it does for me.  But the point is that this was an example of people getting involved and stopping something they didn't want to happen from happening.  This is a perfect example of what we should be doing.  We need to get involved in our government and change things.  Us as teens are not limited by our age[and certainly not adults].  I will be out there campaigning for good, conservative republicans into congress and my state legislature.  If you don't think that our government is in trouble see part two of this post below.

Part two
I think we can all agree that communism is wrong.  If you don't let me explain.  Take the two sides of Berlin during the Cold War.  One side, West Berlin, was controlled by the U.S., France, England, and other generally free countries.  The other side, East Berlin, was controlled by the U.S.S.R., a communist government.  When you look at pictures and statistics it is clear that West Berlin was very prosperous under the free governments, while East Berlin was the exact opposite.  I will not go further then that, if you need more information, Google it[that's the norm these days isn't it? If you really want to get into it, go to the library].  The basic thing though was that the communist side was like a wasteland, while the free side was a very prosperous land.
We can conclude from this and other examples that communism is not a good thing.  With that in mind, let me inform you, if you did not already know, that America was founded as a free nation, a capitalist nation, and a democratic nation[actually, it was not a simple democracy, it was also a republican nation, but that's another topic].  We don't want our nation to become a communist nation, or a socialist nation.  Besides the fact that socialism itself is bad, the simple fact is, one way or another, socialism will always lead to communism.
The other night, at my economics class (it was the night after the health care bill passed in the House) we were talking about command economies, otherwise known as communist economies.  The curriculum was written around fifteen years ago.  In the first page of the chapter we studied it listed seven things that would happen before we, America, became a communist nation.

• Confiscation of private property-The government can now take your property if they deem it necessary. There was a time when the government 'bought' a house from a family in order to put in a mall in the area.
• Restraint of economic competition-This is happening with health-care reform because the government is now going to control one seventh of the economy.  When they take over health-care their removing health-care insurance companies economic competitive market.
• Governmental monopolization of production and distribution-This happened when the Obama administration took over General Motors, a top car manufacturing and distributing company.
• Control of consumption through forced rationing-This is one that you have to think about, but in a way the government has started to do this through health care reform.  I won't explain.
• Strict control or abolition of labor unions-This is the only thing I could not find out via internet or remember from the class, but I am certain that this has happened in some form.
• Nationalization of banking systems-Sadly, I could again not find a direct source for this, though I am certain it has happened, if not from economics class, from watching the news.  One way, in an indirect relation however, the government has nationalized banking systems is by bailing them out.  If the government can bail the banks out they can take them over, simple as that.
• Governmental determination of wages-The government made the minimum wage.  This may sound nice at first but if a company has to pay their employees more their unable to hire more employees and/or build up their company.  When this happens the company starts to go down and then there's less and less jobs until the company goes bankrupt.

[As a note written after this blog post, two or three days afterward.  Even though I sadly cannot remember some of these, for which I apologize, even without them, even if I didn't say anything about them, the others that have happened should be enough to convince you that we're not going in the right direction as a country]

 All if not most of these has happened in some way or another.  This is a very scary thing.  It means that we're on a fast road to communism.  Remember this book was written roughly fifteen years ago, this is terrifying.  I'm not going to ramble on any more.  I think we can agree that our government is changing in a bad way.  I urge you to get out on the streets and campaign for good candidates, do sign waving, walk door to door, go to your local republican party office and see what you can do to help.

That's the last political post hopefully for a while, as I don't like to be so negative as I was in this post.  The next post[hopefully] will be on wizards and powerful beings.

Health Care?

Well, it's practically official, health care will be taken over by the government.  I'm not going to try to change your view on this, it's not all that much necessary at this point.  Now that it's passed in the House, the revised edition will go to the senate again before it goes to the presidents desk.  Which he will sign.  It's a sad day in America.

On another note, if you go to the viewpoint page on this blog you'll find an essay I wrote on Tolkien vs. Rowling.  It was requested and there it is!

Fantasy, Part Four

FANTASY, Part Four, Humans

'As you all know and agree humans originally come from monkeys, chimps, apes etc...'  Sorry, I couldn't resist.  This is the real opening sentence for this post 'Humans have been around for approximately six thousand years, when God created the world and all in it, including man'.  Though man can be a fantasy element, they are also a real species, as you may have guessed.  Since they are real I think I should cover the basis before going into their fantasy counterparts, though their counterpart is for the most part the same. 

 'Then God said, "Let us make man in our image, in our likeness, and let them rule over the fish of the sea and the birds of the air, over the livestock, over all the earth, and over all the creatures that move along the ground."'-Genesis 1:26

 And thus man was born!  Or rather created.  And then the story goes on to say how Eve was created and they walked with God in the garden.  But then the snake enters the scene, and we come to the fall of man, the entry of sin into the world.  And from thence forth man is basically sinful, it is now our nature.  So we must have a Savior to cover our sins.  He is Jesus, the Son of God, and He is God, and He is the Holy Spirit.  The Three are One.  If you don't understand, then, well, that's a topic for another day.

Jesus came into the world to save us from our sins.  And though I could continue and I would like to some other time, this post is on another topic.  (If you would like to learn more please consult your local pastor or youth pastor, or shoot me an email at smr411[at]gmail[dot]com, though the former would probably be better :D)

So, back to sin.  If man in the real world is basically sinful, is man in fantasy also basically sinful?  I would say yes.  Although there are some books that have a goal of showing what sinless man might look like, namely Christopher Hopper's White Lion Chronicles.  But in most other books humans are naturally sinful.  The reason for this being, quite simply, we don't understand what a sinless human is, and from a worldly perspective, we wouldn't even know that there ever were sinless humans (the only sinless humans were Adam and Eve, though there sinless nature didn't last) and thus it is natural to write about humans as sinful in fantasy.

So, then there's the question of other species, such as dwarves and elves, are they sinless?  Well, no.  The above paragraph is true for them as well.  The reason for this being that dwarves and elves are based off the image and characteristics of humans.  And we've established that humans are basically sinful, so naturally, if dwarves and elves are based off humans, they are basically sinful as well.  Okay, done with my little sin sermon.

There really isn't much else to say about humans, I would expect you, my readers, to understand humans.  Though I've been corrected for assuming things before, nevertheless, there is one more element of humans in fantasy.  

Humans in fantasy are usually the largest race.  And if they're not the largest, they are the most public, that meaning other races are usually hidden under mountains or secluded in their forests.  This, like many things, is not always true, but for the most part, it is accurate.  So, that's about all I can say on the subject of humans. 

I have a race in mind for the next post, but if there is a race you want me to cover please drop me a comment.

And on another note, the poll is now closed, I personally like this one, and apparently you guys do too by the results.

Edit:  For those that don't know me well enough to understand my sense of humor, I was being sarcastic in the beginning, I in no way at all believe in evolution.  The earth was created by God, and God continued to have a hand in it since it's creation.  But that's another post...

Word War 3.16.10

WORD WAR!!  If you haven't done a Word War before, I'll explain it.  At 8:00 tonight we'll start.  Before then, any time, post your current word count for your chapter, novella, whatever it is you're working on.  Then, at 8:00, write like a maniac until 9:00.  At the end, post how many words you wrote and we'll see who won!  Remember though, it's not about winning, it's about encouraging each other in our writing.
Note:  8:00 and 9:00 are both Eastern Time Zone, if you are in another time zone, adjust in accordingly.

Also, tonight I'll post the poll for the templates, voting continues until tomorrow night where I'll see which one won and make the final decision on the permanent template for The Narrowing Road!

Edit:  Change of time, start time is 6:30, end time 7:30, still EST.

Sin=Punishment

Whether it be fantasy, mystery, romance, or any other type of fiction, as well as non-fiction in most cases, when the good guy does something bad, they should be punished.  This is very important, as it displays the morals and the ethics (they are different) of the author, as well as the protagonist and supporting characters.  It's also the natural order of things the way God designed it.  When someone does something wrong they should, and will be punished.  [The last sentence is talking about real life, not books]  There are some authors that try to avoid punishing their characters for doing wrong, this is completely wrong, and in addition to not being a good book, it also is against the Bible.  Don't ask which books do this, I know of at least seven, and if I told you their titles it could spark unneeded debate.

For example, take this completely random situation (I just made it up, it is not from any book, also, don't judge it, it's just an example, I didn't spend hours editing it lol):

Sleen took a hammer to the window.  He heard a crack and then glass falling on the ground.
He crept down the isles of the dark store, completely alone.  He checked his watch, 1:30 AM, he only had five minutes to get it and get out.  He found what he was looking for while waving his flashlight around.  He brought out a hammer and smashed a lock on a cabinet, grabbed a small portable computer and ran for the door.
Sleen noticed a police car was parked on the other side of the street, the officer standing at the door of the building opposite to the store.  The officer ran over to the door, not wasting a moment.

Now, we know nothing about this guy[Sleen], but let's assume he's a good guy.  He works hard everyday to provide for his family of three, but he just has to have this computer.  From here we can take the story two different ways, only one is Biblical, has morals/ethics, and only one makes sense.

Option one
As the officer got closer Sleen started to feel himself panic, he wasn't a bad guy, he was just in a bad situation.  However the police officer didn't seem to be coming to arrest him, he simply waved and approached very friendly.  "Whatcha got there?" the office asked while shining his flashlight on Sleen and then shining it on the window of the store that had been broken.
"Oh, nothing..." Sleen said nervously.
"You got the new Shiny-Laptopo(fictional computer)?  I hear that this is the top-of-the-line computer."
"Really? That's good." Sleen said, still panicking within.
"Okay, well you have a good night now." The officer said as he turned to go back to the other building.

Option two
As the officer got closer Sleen started to feel himself panic, he wasn't a criminal, he didn't kill people, he just wanted a computer.  The officer crossed the street in a flurry and brought his gun out from his belt, "Freeze!  Put your hands in the air and set down the computer down softly,"  Sleen obeyed.  "You're under arrest," the officer quickly grabbed his hands and cuffed them, then shuffled him over to the police car.

I don't think I need to tell you, but the second one is right.  Does it make sense that a police officer would just let the person go after breaking into a store and stealing a laptop?  No, it's against the law and against the Bible.  This is something we've got to remember when writing, we can't let our good guys deeds go unpunished.  We just can't.  Now, you may ask "Are you saying that we should let our bad guys go unpunished?", and I would say yes.  And no.  Yes, they will not be punished yet, though sometimes you can throw in a defeat in battle or whatever fits to your book.  The reason I say no though is because eventually they'll get what's coming to them.  Take for example the devil.  He sinned, he was punished by not being an angel, or being able to reside in Heaven, but in addition he'll be punished in the end, he will suffer forever in his pit.